walking
towards the opened door
I’m pushed by GO riders
sadness comes
and helps shut me in
a maple leaf
drifts through the window
and lands on me
I, too, have wandered
from my natural path
getting off the train
I drag myself to the place
I live
no one for company
traffic sounds cheer me along
March / April, 2010 issue of Sketchbook
Note: GO Transit is an inter-regional public transit system in Southern Ontario, Canada
Poetic Musings: Battle Haiku by Masaoka Shiki
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the pear blossoming
after the battle
this ruined house
*The Haiku Handbook*, 1985
Masaoka Shiki
Commentary: This wartime haiku effectively employs what W...
