bits of yesterday
cling to today
Third Place, Inaugural Janice M Bostok International Haiku Award
Judges’ Comments (by Jim Kacian and Cynthia Rowe)
This ties the natural world with the human -- we drag the dream world into the day with us, for a bit, even as our waking obscures that other “real” world we inhabit. At the same time, snow covers what we knew of the outside, but we recognizes it's still there, beneath the covering, evidenced by its shapes
One Man's Maple Moon: Old Sweater Tanka by Susan Weaver - *English Original* I can't stay here ... any more like the sleeves of an old sweater your life unraveling *Ribbons,* 12:1, Winter 2016 Susan Weaver *Chi...