I took a comma out
of the poem
summer stars reflected
on the lake of my mind
NeverEnding Story, April 11, 2013
To the Lighthouse: Sensing Tanka: Perceiving Life Beyond the Ordinary - (First presented by David Terelinck at Bowerbird Tanka Group meeting #6, March 20 2011 and reprinted by kind permission of the author) Much excellent tanka...