my love tanka
is already one-week old
70 drafts
in the making...
the wind moans in the night
Sketchbook, 7:3, May/June 2012
Poetic Musings: Mother and Ocean Haiku by Kobayashi Issa
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mother I never knew,
each time I see the ocean,
each time --
*The Essential Haiku*, 1995
Kobayashi Issa
Commentary: L1 establishes both the emotional atm...
