eating alone,
one bowl of rice
after another . . .
the fatter I get
the less I am seen
Atlas Poetica, 33, 2018
To the Lighthouse: Effective Use of a Run-on Title
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*A run-on title is a phrase in the title space that starts a grammatical
unit in the following poem text.*
For example, my tanka prose below:
Sunflowers ...
