ten years later
back in my home country . . .
by slanted moonlight
I drink to the old house
tucked warm within me
Editor's Choice Tanka, Cattails, April 2026
Editor's CommentaryThis poignant tanka takes one back in imagination to early roots, capturing a sense of memory and emotional connection to the past. The words, ‘back in my home country’, touch a chord within. The phrase, ‘by slanted moonlight’, is striking. It’s as if a narrow beam of light opens a window into the child’s memory. ‘I drink to the old house’ brings thoughts of absent family and friends, a nostalgic reflection of those who shared company is rediscovered. The last line, ‘tucked warm within me,’ suggests a loving picture of mother and child. There is a sense of nostalgia and tenderness in this writing.
