Editor’s Commentary: Thanks to Chen-ou for yet another classic tanka I had tucked away for an EC also. An old relationship, not only in the many years spend apart, but also in the visuals. Using the word "furrows" for the first line, immediately captures the mystical expression and loneliness (yugentei). The mood is further enhanced by the couple passing each other in silence.
Biting NOT Barking: Same River Haiku by Julie Schwerin
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*English Original*
bloodshed
we step into it again
the same river
*Frameless Sky,* 16, 2022
Julie Schwerin
*Chinese Translation (Traditional)*
流血不止
我們再...