Editor’s Commentary: Thanks to Chen-ou for yet another classic tanka I had tucked away for an EC also. An old relationship, not only in the many years spend apart, but also in the visuals. Using the word "furrows" for the first line, immediately captures the mystical expression and loneliness (yugentei). The mood is further enhanced by the couple passing each other in silence.
A room of My Own: Lopsided Moon Haiku
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lopsided moon ...
eyes fixed on my wife
straddling me
FYI: This haiku could be read as a sequel and a prequel to the following
ones respectively:
butterf...

