Editor’s Commentary: Thanks to Chen-ou for yet another classic tanka I had tucked away for an EC also. An old relationship, not only in the many years spend apart, but also in the visuals. Using the word "furrows" for the first line, immediately captures the mystical expression and loneliness (yugentei). The mood is further enhanced by the couple passing each other in silence.
Butterfly Dream: Shaved Head Haiku by Susan Bonk Plumridge
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*English Original*
shaved head
making friends
with the wind
*Failed Haiku,* 7: 77, May 2022
Susan Bonk Plumridge
*Chinese Translation (Traditional)*...

