your love poem is filled
with aluminum powder:
in the email
her emoticon winks at me
with its tongue stuck out
The Tanka Journal, 41, 2012
A Room of My Own: Hum of Summer Clouds Haiku
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rippling sunshine
a hum of summer clouds
in the mountain stream
FYI: It might be interesting to do a comparison reading of my haiku below:
the sky dapple...
