this evening
I took a comma out
of the poem
summer stars reflected
on the lake of my mind
NeverEnding Story, April 11, 2013
A Room of My Own: Hum of Summer Clouds Haiku
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rippling sunshine
a hum of summer clouds
in the mountain stream
FYI: It might be interesting to do a comparison reading of my haiku below:
the sky dapple...
