this evening
I took a comma out
of the poem
summer stars reflected
on the lake of my mind
NeverEnding Story, April 11, 2013
Poetic Musings: Seashell Haiku by Chen-ou Liu
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Commentary by *The Solitary Daisy Columnist*, Sean B. Wright.
*This is a resonant, memory-laden haiku that uses a familiar sensory
gesture to evoke dist...
