more leaves
on the muddy ground
than on the tree ...
a laid-off worker turns
to look at the factory gate
Ribbons, 12:2, Spring/Summer 2016
A Room of My Own: Hum of Summer Clouds Haiku
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rippling sunshine
a hum of summer clouds
in the mountain stream
FYI: It might be interesting to do a comparison reading of my haiku below:
the sky dapple...
