English Original:
gazing
in the mirror
a stranger
stares back at me
a man with no eyes
Japanese Translation by Hidenori Hiruta
鏡見る見知らぬ人が見返して我を見つめる目のない男
Akita International Haiku Network (Oct. 30, 2010)
A Room of My Own: Time Span Tanka
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in blossom rain
my pink-haired daughter laments,
*we'll all die one day...*
I reply, let's hope
the time span makes life unique
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