this evening
I took a comma out
of the poem
summer stars reflected
on the lake of my mind
NeverEnding Story, April 11, 2013
A Room of My Own: Time Span Tanka
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in blossom rain
my pink-haired daughter laments,
*we'll all die one day...*
I reply, let's hope
the time span makes life unique
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