this evening
I took a comma out
of the poem
summer stars reflected
on the lake of my mind
NeverEnding Story, April 11, 2013
One Man's Maple Moon: Crevices Tanka by Jackie Chou
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*English Original*
tiny crevices
on the concrete road
the small chances
with which I blossom
like a wildflower
*Oblivious to Daffodils: Haiku and Tanka of ...
