Editor’s Commentary: Thanks to Chen-ou for yet another classic tanka I had tucked away for an EC also. An old relationship, not only in the many years spend apart, but also in the visuals. Using the word "furrows" for the first line, immediately captures the mystical expression and loneliness (yugentei). The mood is further enhanced by the couple passing each other in silence.
Butterfly Dream: Mother's Voice Haiku by Hilary Tann
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*English Original*
calling home --
the colour of mother’s voice
before her words
*Dust of Summers*, 2007
Hilary Tann
*Chinese Translation (Traditional)...

