Editor’s Commentary: Thanks to Chen-ou for yet another classic tanka I had tucked away for an EC also. An old relationship, not only in the many years spend apart, but also in the visuals. Using the word "furrows" for the first line, immediately captures the mystical expression and loneliness (yugentei). The mood is further enhanced by the couple passing each other in silence.
Butterfly Dream: Bodies and Light Haiku by Raymond Roseliep
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*English Original*
our bodies
listen
to light
*Listen to Light*, 1980
Raymond Roseliep
*Chinese Translation (Traditional)*
我們的身體
傾聽
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