Editor’s Commentary: Thanks to Chen-ou for yet another classic tanka I had tucked away for an EC also. An old relationship, not only in the many years spend apart, but also in the visuals. Using the word "furrows" for the first line, immediately captures the mystical expression and loneliness (yugentei). The mood is further enhanced by the couple passing each other in silence.
Biting NOT Barking: Bloody Hand Print Haiku by Denis M. Garrison
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*English Original*
back home after work --
on my fresh-painted front door
a bloody hand print
*Fire Blossoms*, 2008
Denis M. Garrison
*Chinese Translati...

