first French kiss
the push and pull
of her hands
Japanese Translation by Hidenori Hiruta
初めてのフレンチキス
彼女の両手が
押したり引いたり
Akita International Haiku Network, April 13, 2019
A Room of My Own: Time Span Tanka
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in blossom rain
my pink-haired daughter laments,
*we'll all die one day...*
I reply, let's hope
the time span makes life unique
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