Chen-ou Liu's Translation Project: First English-Chinese Haiku and Tanka Blog

Tuesday, July 29, 2025

Prayers in the Smoky Air Tanka

Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CCVII: "prayers in the smoky air"

her prayers 
hanging in the smoky air ...
a bent woman
holds the Gazan night sky
on her bony shoulders



Added: Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CCVIII: "if only just a nightmare"

Gazan night sky
a ghastly shade of red ...
a white-haired man
murmurs, if only this were 
just a nightmare


Added: Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CCIX: " blood-stained bird cage"

smoky ruins ...
a blood-stained bird cage
with the door open


Added: Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CCX: "a headless doll"

smoky skies
between two skeletal houses
a headless doll