the thud of earth
on this little coffin
in fading light
the sound of the wind
even colder
Gusts, 29 Spring/Summer 2019
Poetic Musings: Dry Creekbed Haiku by Chuck Brickley
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dry creekbed
the gleam of a bullet shell
the only sound
*Earthshine*, 2017
Chuck Brickley
Commentary: L1 sets the scene and mood while the use of synesthe...