screams red bleeding through midnight fog
FYI: This is written in response to the following:
knife cold swimming into blue bones
Modern Haiku, 44:1, 2013
Susan Constable
My detailed analysis can be accessed here.
Poetic Musings: Reveille Tanka by Tracy Davidson
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reveille
the bugler’s last note lingers
in the silence
as far as eye can see
rows of white crosses
Third Place, 2025 Sanford Goldstein International Tanka C...
