the sharp edge
of her departing words ...
my head hangs
on the crescent moon's tip
in our childhood river
Ripples in the Sand, 2016 Tanka Society of America Members’ Anthology
Poetic Musings: Seashell Haiku by Chen-ou Liu
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Commentary by *The Solitary Daisy Columnist*, Sean B. Wright.
*This is a resonant, memory-laden haiku that uses a familiar sensory
gesture to evoke dist...
